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12/06/05
You've encapsulated the hope of spring beautifully in that little sparrow. Well done.
12/06/05
It's the little things. You made a great use of the topic. :D
12/07/05
Nice job, very cute title.
I liked this line: "It was on such a day that Sarah found spring—the kind of spring that lingers and eventually finds a home in an aching and lonely heart." Cute story. God Bless.
Couldn't help but think of Mt. 10:31: "...you are worth more than many sparrows."

Interesting that such a tiny creature could be the bearer of such great tidings. :-)
12/12/05
Very sweet! Good story.(Although, I wanted to know more about Sarah and the bird). :0)