The Official Writing Challenge
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This was so very good! I loved it and enjoyed reading it.
What a wonderful message! As usual, beautifully done.
One more note: It was beautiful. The sweetness and preciousness shows through in your writing. And that's a good thing.
I love the mother's comment about the dormant seed. Full of hope, and very touching.
I too liked the comment about the dormant seed. This was beautifully done. A very special piece. God Bless.
What a gentle reminder of how easy we have Life, compared to many. You write so well transporting us to another world and culture, thank you.
You brought me right into this story and held my attention throughout. Great job.
You've created a real character that people with unsaved antagonistic family members identify with. Strong sense of place. Story flows well. I love the faith she displays at the end. Well done. Yeggy

Loved the story, but especially the mother's letter. This left me with a sense of assurance, even in times of familial persecution. God's ways are bigger than our own. :-)

Beautifully written.
Wow Suzanne, this one was even more brilliant than usual! I know people like the girl in your story, and I almost cried to read it, it was so good.
This is a fantastic piece of writing. I am so blessed reading it. Thank you!