The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/05
this was such a sweet story! Very well written. the only question I had was when you said he is such a sweet boy in present tense..I wasn't sure about that..so probably shouldn't mention it..but the rest was soooo good! Good emotions!
12/06/05
Sometimes the smallest touch opens a world. Just beautiful!
12/06/05
I thought this was lovely.
Great!
12/06/05
I thought this was lovely.
Great!
This was sweet. I would use italics for this line: "He looks like a sweet young man" since it appears to be her thoughts and also for the letter. It might just be me but I find it easier to follow. Enjoyed reading this. Well done.

12/07/05
Very touching to see the woman's heart thawing. Good job.
Proof that God's messengers can be anyone....even the paper boy. :-) Nice story!
12/12/05
Very sweet. You paint a good picture of how the smallest gestures can make the biggest changes. Nicely done. :0)