The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/05
Yes, this WAS very creative and I liked the repetition. Very descriptive too.
12/06/05
This was beautiful! "Just an ordinary" drew all of the paragraphs together into a symphony conducted by the Maker Himself.
So many wonderful word pictures! I could envision this as a children's book with very realistically rendered illustrations, something that adult as well as child could enjoy. Thank you for painting this picture for us!
12/06/05
very creative!
12/07/05
Yes, this would make a cute children's story. I'd like to see the same concepts done without the anthropomorphic seed--you've got a good object lesson for adults here, too.
12/10/05
This was delightful. The repetition tied it all together and gave it a rhythmic feel. Very well done.
12/11/05
A gentle story with lovely description. I enjoyed it!
12/12/05
Wonderful! Perfect for illustrations.