The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/05
I like this very much. Interesting meter, brings lots of images to mind. Good job!
12/07/05
Very creative and thought-provoking. I think if you place a few of the line breaks differently, it will flow better. Lovely imagery!
12/08/05
The meditations in this free verse are so filled with hope. Beautiful! I liked the thought that winter and death is on this side of the door and spring and life on the other. I also liked the description of the door and the "beautiful blue bowl of winter sky".