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12/06/05
Very cute story. I'm not sure about birds praying, but I did enjoy this tale.
12/06/05
An unusual tale. It took me a while to realize that you were talking about birds.
"Praise Him, hills and mountains, fruit trees and forests; all animals, tame and wild, reptiles and birds." Psalm 148:9, 10

"Be glad, earth and sky! Roar sea and every creature in you: be glad fields and everything in you! The trees in the woods will shout for joy." Psalm 96:11, 12


"And then I heard every creature in heaven, on earth, in the world below, and in the sea - all living beings in the universe - and they were singing: 'To Him who sits on the throne and to the Lamb, be praise and honour, glory and might, forever and ever'."
Revelation 5:13
12/07/05
A clever children's story.
I knew they weren't human, but I enjoyed the suspense and wondering what they would turn out to be. Very enjoyable. And perhaps the birds have a thing or two to teach us about praise and thanksgiving.
I too, enjoyed the realization that they weren't human, but the antisipation of waiting to see what they were. Cute story!!
AFTER I figured out the characters, I could envision illustrations accompanying this story - cute!!
12/12/05
Very creative. Would make a good illustrated children's story. :0)