The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/05
Nice writing, I enjoyed it. Hope does indeed deliver a sense of belief in life. thanks for the Poem and God bless you now and always.
12/07/05
Some of your line breaks came in awkward places, making the reader backtrack to get your meaning. But I love your last stanza--just gorgeous.
Your last stanza says it all. I enjoyed your poem. Hope gives us a reason to want to live.