The Official Writing Challenge
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Your poem tells us why most people like springtime more than the other seasons. Love is in the air and love is a very pleasurable and powerful feeling for us humans to encounter. A fine poem which contrasts with the factual information given at the beginning.
12/07/05
Seems like the 3rd verse is out of place, shouldn't it be at the end?

Interesting contrast between the facts of spring, and its feelings.