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12/05/05
Does the meaning change or do we perceive spring differently as we get older? That's what this piece brought to mind for me. Can't comment on form--rank beginner especially in poetic stuff.
12/05/05
One or two errors here and there. Many things you enjoyed about spring when you were young, but now you see it from a spiritual perspective. Thanks for sharing.
12/07/05
I think this would be better as prose paragraphs, and then expanded...more about your feelings for spring, then and now.
I would have liked to have seen your reflections expanded further - what you liked about Spring as a child and what you appreciate now - and then conclude with your lovely thought that God is with us regardless of the season of life. Keep writing.
12/11/05
Short, sweet and the Bible verse goes beautifully with your thoughts of Spring. Nicely done. God Bless.