The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/05
I love the "dialouge" in this, although maybe some quotation marks would have been a nice touch.
But it's great without the quotations too.
Lovely message.
Lovely thought.
Your heart is in the right place when you wrote this.
God bless.
11/29/05
Yes this is cute stuff, nice ,simple but unique and very relevant. God bless as you keep this writing coming.
11/29/05
The simplicity is what makes this beautiful. I was fine without the quoatation marks until I got to a paragraph that wasn't a quote - that threw me a bit. But overall, this is well-written.
11/30/05
I liked your creativity; not a daffodil or an oak could have climbed up to the cross where our Savior gave His live for us...only a nobody, like a vine. Loved it!
12/02/05
Very creative.He IS the VINE...which makes this a multi-layered message .Nicely done.
12/03/05
Creative entry. Being a grammar nit-picker I would have preferred the quotation marks. Watch your tenses!
Nice imagination. Keep it up.