The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the "dialouge" in this, although maybe some quotation marks would have been a nice touch.
But it's great without the quotations too.
Lovely message.
Lovely thought.
Your heart is in the right place when you wrote this.
God bless.
Yes this is cute stuff, nice ,simple but unique and very relevant. God bless as you keep this writing coming.
The simplicity is what makes this beautiful. I was fine without the quoatation marks until I got to a paragraph that wasn't a quote - that threw me a bit. But overall, this is well-written.
I liked your creativity; not a daffodil or an oak could have climbed up to the cross where our Savior gave His live for us...only a nobody, like a vine. Loved it!
Very creative.He IS the VINE...which makes this a multi-layered message .Nicely done.
Creative entry. Being a grammar nit-picker I would have preferred the quotation marks. Watch your tenses!
Nice imagination. Keep it up.