The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/05
Very nice mix of the classic once-upon-a-time tale and Christian references. Kudos!
11/30/05
Pretty kewl adaptation.
11/30/05
Very cool, and well thought-out. Great job!
11/30/05
Methinks I've heard this story before as a child-but NEVER so eloquently and exquisitely written!Perfectly and entertainingly written! Grabs you and holds you...kudos! Great job.
12/01/05
The first part of this story especially reminds me of Tolkein's wonderful short story called "Leaf by Niggle." If you haven't read it, do so! Nice piece of writing, this.
12/02/05
What a wonderful parable told in fairy tale style!
12/03/05
There's a lot packed into this; it may well sell in a children's magazine if it was a little longer and explained more (why his dad wanted the seeds in his pocket when the whole purpose of them was to grow a vine).