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11/30/05
This is truly beautiful. I love the word choice, the rhyme scheme, the message. With a few edits for meter, this belongs in a book of sacred poetry.
11/30/05
Thank you for sharing this. A couple of edits and this is publishable in a local Christian magazaine.
11/30/05
Beautiful. Thoughtful. Medatative.
12/02/05
Very enjoyable read. Loved brambles and shambles.
12/02/05
This is really beautiful! The only tiny thing that tripped me up was having "fruit" in between "roots" and "shoots". But otherwise, I absolutely love it!
12/02/05
Fantastico! Such a beautiful message in rhyme! A real God-given talent! Kudos!
Beautiful. I loved the way we could glimpse the mesage of the cross beneath the words and then you brought it more to the fore in the last stanzas. Great word choice. I loved it. Well done.