The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/05
Absolutely spectacular. I'd love to have this as a bulletin insert on Communion Sunday. It's breath-taking.
11/29/05
I have to echo Jan...this is special. Thank you.
Ooooh I loved the first two stanzas...I just don't understand,
...I
Became one with the Earth
Where I am now...

Christ didn't did He, I mean become earthdust again as we do? Perhaps I misunderstood...but the rest was delightful...you deserve a better response than this.
12/02/05
A poetic way to describe the Communion Service...at least that is my take on this gem. Nicely written. Kudos!
12/03/05
Very, very good.
This works! :D