The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/05
A few anachronisms here--the coffee cup, the cafe--but otherwise a very engaging story, and a nice twist on the topic. Very creative!
11/29/05
I really like the surprise ending. I hadn't seen that one coming.
11/30/05
I caught a few tiny typos, but the story was absolutely delightful! Great job!