The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/14
Aww...sweet and poignant tale. Nicely told.
God bless~
08/02/14
Thanks for sharing a sweet "well seasoned" story! My only suggestion would be to think about somehow re-wording the last paragraph so as to not contain as many hyphens. They seemed to make the last few sentences read a bit choppy (for me anyway).
08/03/14
Friendships really do add so much to our lives! I am so much richer for life-long friendships that season my own life. This is a lovely story and reminded me of how blessed I am.
08/04/14
Well written.

I could feel the love you had for your friend. Good job.

God bless