The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/14
Never would have guessed where this was going—great suspense. It reminded me of a speaker I once heard who used to hang around barbershops just to listen to the conversations. Then he used those in his stories.
07/25/14
Great story! I loved this.

God bless~
You do a wonderful job of developing your MC. I really, really enjoyed it and think you carried the suspense right to the end. Congratulations! Happy Dance!
Congratulations on EC. I especially liked the twist at the end!
08/04/14
Unique way for your MC to get ammunition for a story line.

I wonder how many 'People Watchers' are lurking about?

Well done and congratulations on your EC placing.