The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful. It has a lovely flow to it. The words speak of a longing, one I think we can all understand. Nicely done.
07/25/14
Hauntingly beautiful.

God bless~
07/27/14
This is beautiful. Some of us are old enough to be nostalgic about pens that were dipped into those little white inkwells in the right hand corner of the school desk. And the blank sheet of white paper that the monitor handed out to write a composition. Ahhh, I do love being taken on a trip down memory lane.
07/27/14
So beautiful. Love the rhythm and the flow and the pictures this poem paints for me. Lovely, lovely work.
07/30/14
You have such a lovely way of flourishing words. I come away from your entries feeling aggrandized.
07/31/14
Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Very well deserved, such a fine piece of poetry!
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