The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/14
Excellent story. I especially loved the ending.
Enjoyed this story. Reminded me of my grandparents and all the advice and guidance they gave me as a kid. It helped keep me from straying too far off track. Thanks for sharing!
Seth is an interesting character and Mrs. Bradford even more so. Great dialogue. For increasing the professionalism of your piece, I think it's a good idea to remember to include the name of who is speaking (or the appropriate pronoun), for example: "AND, unless you want to be expelled from St. John’s Christian, you WILL toe the mark here,” she said, peering over the rim of her thick glasses.
07/26/14
So enjoyable! Great job!

God bless~