The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/05
There's a lot to like about this poem--consistent rhyme and meter, a wonderful message. I'm not sure about the word "rife" in the first stanza, and I think some punctuation would help with the flow. Excellent wordsmithing!
11/30/05
Nice matched verse, good pace. Thanks.
Beautiful meaning in flowing werse! Your treatment of this familiar image is skillful and very very appealing!
Good rhyming.