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Extremely creative and spot on topic.

Thanks for sharing.
A catchy title and an entertaining story. Well done.
Unique and enthralling tale which was spot on topic.
Well done!

God bless~
This is a great Sci-Fi story and it's not even my favorite genre. I liked the juxtaposition of an old-fashioned beginning for a future world. It was creative and grabbed my attention. I did wonder about the lights because you never explained that! :) All in time. You did a wonderful job of developing your characters. The dialog moved the story along and it was paced perfectly.