The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/14
I enjoyed this recount of the Bible story and its connection to day and night. If they'd had watches they'd have been much more aware of the extra-long day! Well told.
07/22/14
Good job of recounting the story.

I had to laugh a little at the intermingling of phases and words that were not associated with that time. such as "Headquarters" and
"General" Joshua.

I don't recall seeing those words in Joshua 10.

Keep writing!
This is a thrilling tale. I enjoyed every word. The opening line is so powerful. I've never quite thought of it like that. I even read it twice. Your retelling of the Bible story was full of suspense, even though I'm familiar with it. I totally enjoyed your characters and the dialog felt real and pulled me in even more.
07/22/14
Nicely done! Excellent writing here.

God bless~
Very unique take on the topic. Well done!
07/24/14
It's interesting you way you couched your story of the Bible into modern language and it worked. The story itself shows us God at work in the long ago past and it gives good reference to what we can expect of Him in the present and the future.
07/24/14
Sorry, I meant to say 'the way' instead of 'you way'
Congratulations on ranking 23 overall!