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06/12/14
What a great first chapter to a book I would love to read. You had me in suspense the whole way with vivid descriptions. This is wonderful writing.
Great work!
06/14/14
What a compelling story. I love the change in his life once he learned about the "Name." Nice work!
Incredible story, absolutely riveting!

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06/16/14
Excellent job! Beautiful story filled with an important message. WEll done.

God bless~
06/18/14
Wow! Captivating! Great job.
06/19/14
Congratulations!

God Bless~