The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/14
Excellent job! Well done.

God bless~
Riveting. Good job.
A very well written take on that story. Many voted off the truth but also there were those who accepted the truth with joy of heart.

Each person who hears the bible story or a sermon is given the opportunity to vote on the truth: to take it in or reject it.

You used the information very well and put it in a nice story form.
06/10/14
A very nice way of telling the story from the Bible, of Paul's intervention in the lives of a depraved people and his success in changing the lives of many.