The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/14
This multi-layered piece elicited a medley of emotions with each word. Beautiful ending, well done.

God bless~
06/02/14
So much depth, love, and beauty in this piece. Other than wanting to know WHAT the name was, I loved every bit. Thank you SO much for sharing!
This is just packed full of emotions and wonderful words. I felt like I was eavesdropping on an intimate conversation. The only red ink I have is I think you had 7 or 8 too many exclamation points. I know this was more like dialog or perhaps a letter so exclamation points can be used a bit more, but you did such an awesome job of expressing yourself, you didn't need them at all. Congratulations on ranking 14th overall. Happy Dance!
Oh and I meant to say with your title and my name I had to read it as soon as I saw it. :)