The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/05
HAHAHAHAHA!
This is a fairy tale gone wrong!
Different approach. Fun read.
I love it. I really do.
Well done!
11/28/05
Funny, funny story! Great job!!!!
I really like your original approach... all the way down to 'and they lived happily ever after - apart' :). You captured the character of the princess well. Thanks for sharing
11/28/05
This was cute! It's nice to read a different style and take on the topic!
That was hilarious!!! Well done!!!
11/28/05
Loved the twist on one of my favorites!!! Well done (loved the accent!!!)
11/28/05
Loved this one, especially the accent. Did you know that a certain Anita has put a link up to this on the forums??
11/28/05
Absolutely delightful! Love Bob and his accent and the unlikely ending. Great job.
11/28/05
That was great. I loved it. Now I need to take a lesson from this and not be crabby in the morning, just in case my prince should appear by my bed one morning. ;)
eh...thot wuz some story ye rote there, bard! Still laughin' and slappin' me knee!
11/29/05
This is a perfect example of HOW TO capture the Reader's interest and carry them through to the end! The GOAL of every writer! Stupendous job with a Standing Ovation from an avid Reader and "wannabe" Writer! Kudos!
This was such a treat for me! As a former "Eliza Doolittle" and a current frequent watcher of one of my kids' favorite movies Mary Poppins, this had me grinning from beginning to end. Splendously done - I look forward to seeing who wrote this piece as the style seems VERY familiar. Great job!
Awesome! SO funny! LOL
Very funny :D Congrats on a job well done!
12/01/05
Unique, humourous - this is great. And now we finally know who wrote it.
12/01/05
This reminds me of a book called 'The Paper Bag Princess' where the fairy tale characters don't follow the traditional mold. Bob Charming's dialect was great; Princess Aurora was a snob until she needed him to help her. I agree with everyone else; this was humorous!
12/01/05
Touche' Jan! :) A great one!
12/01/05
Wonderful! So enjoyed this! Loved Bob's 'accent.' Great job!
12/01/05
How funny! A fractured fairy tale! Loved it!
12/02/05
Loved this, loved the clever way you subverted everything we expected this story to be. Well done! Yeggy
phantasmagorical....oh I loved it...very clever, witty, light, bright, so very well written characters clear as day, very visual...bravo!
If I was wearing one, my hat would be off to you....
A fairytale that's just like real life: shock horror! Very fun. Good job.
What a great read! I loved every bit of it. Very creative and so much fun!
12/03/05
How very creative! I enjoyed it.
12/03/05
Awesome, simply awesome!
12/06/05
I love your use of language with both main characters! Well done!!! This was brilliant.
Really cute comment on fairy tale and the vanity of a woman. I really enjoyed it.
Too funny! My oldest will have to read this so I will save it to my favorites and send her the link.
We loved it. Thanks for chapter 2 of a wonderful fairy tale!