The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/14
Awwww. Cute story.

God bless~
06/01/14
Cute and fun piece - enjoyed this walk down memory lane with the MC - and learning about all these friends.
06/03/14
This reads like nonfiction but it's marked fiction so I'm assuming it is. I'm still getting accustomed to marking the right one myself. I felt for your MC in his inability to make and keep a good friend, until getting married. Yet the happy ending makes this an endearing piece.

I felt like each of the events that separated friends was just the kind of adversity that's needed to be a real friend. I wouldn't have been able to pass up the opportunity to bring that out, but that's just me. This is an easy read and enjoyable. Keep up the good work!
Congratulations on ranking 18th overall. Happy Dance!