The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/14
This was a fun and most enjoyable read!

God bless~
05/24/14
The title drew me in and I wasn't disappointed. I loved the repetition in the dialogue with the grandmother. It built the momentum of the story well. And, you wrapped it up with perfect ending. Well done!
05/28/14
I'm glad that Marty was able to stand up for himself, even if it wasn't standing up to Mike, but deciding to do what was right. I also liked the little touches of spanish in this piece.