The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/14
This was touching and such a joy to read. Elegantly stated, well done.

God bless~
05/28/14
Awww! I liked Eliza and Melanie. What sweet characters. The emotion between them was very tender and sweet--it matched your title as well.

I had to chuckle at the "date palm" mention, because I have encountered that, while trying to explain "facepalm" before. Good job and thanks for sharing!