The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/14
Interesting take on the topic - and I'm sure there was much gossip about Jesus running during this time.

I would have loved to see a bit more showing/description. This felt a bit dry to me. More action and visual words would have brought the scene more to life, I think.

Nice job - thanks for sharing!

05/19/14
Your story was compelling and on topic. The scene depicting Jesus on the cross was vivid, and well written.

Overall, a great job with approach and delivery.


God Bless~
05/20/14
I liked your approach to the topic. Your descriptions were vivid and made me feel like I was there in the moment.
Great Job!