The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/14
The wisdom comes from the Lord, and sometimes we just don't listen to His voice. As your piece so masterfully states, it could have repercussions for many.

Well done, well said. Great job. I loved the closing prayer.

God bless~
05/10/14
I also liked the closing prayer.
I wonder if perhaps the topic called for a sequence of flawed choices leading to a shambles, rather than individual errors. You could have developed the story of David in this way to show how one mistake led to another and so on.
Nevertheless, a good devotional piece.
05/10/14
This article really hit me between the eyes. I needed to read this today. God used your writing to convey His truth to me in a wonderful way. Thank you for the message.
Excellent.
05/15/14
Congratulations on 2nd place.
Well done.
05/15/14
Congrats!

God bless~
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So well written . . .

Congratulations!
Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV