The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/14
This was wonderful! I love how you wove her rediscovery of lost loves and showed how she had lost information from her notes at youth camps in the past.

This really felt so realistic and authentic. I found myself wanting to read more by the end. Great idea to use the daily diary. I think this may be a winner this week.

Awesome job!
05/04/14
Creative approach to the topic at hand. I enjoyed the daily journaling, and the obvervations along the way.

Good message too!

God bless~
05/08/14
This was wonderful Allison! Congratulations!
05/08/14
Love this. Many congratulations on your well deserved EC
05/08/14
This should be required reading for every teen-ager.
:-) Congratulations!
05/08/14
I was pretty sure your entry was leading to a "revelation" for the MC, but knowing the direction didn't make it predictable, and it didn't stop me from thoroughly enjoying reading about her week. I especially love the ending. Congrats on your EC!!
05/08/14
Congratulations on your well-deserved EC! So true to life, the disconnection 'anguish', and I'd like to think that the ending would be true for many.