The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/14
This is so lovely - like a breath of fresh air! My dear old mum used to use the phrase 'sanctified common sense' which I think really describes this inspiring devotional piece of writing. Just great. Thankyou.
05/04/14
What a kind and gentle reminder that there are other options, other things we can do that help us to re-connect with God, friends and family.

This flowed like a beautiful piece of poetry and read like a well written short story.

Great job.
05/04/14
Great job with the topic...and thanks for providing so many options to the readers to think about instead of "technology."

God bless~
05/08/14
Many congrats Verna - am so glad this lovely piece got a very well deserved EC.
05/08/14
This is a 'devotional" message that is profound, yet easy to grasp. Quite worthy of being among the top ten!
05/09/14
Such wonderful wisdom in this gem! Even though I'm comfortable with the use of technology, I choose to keep it minimal in my life. But I still garnered a lot from your piece. Congratulations!
05/17/14
Great reminder, Verna, of what is really important.