The Official Writing Challenge
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Okay, you got me laughing out loud at that last line.

Great job of taking the idea of digital detox to it's unnatural, illogical extreme.

Nice job! This was a very fun read.
WOnderful job and a delightful read.

God bless~
You made "police state" sound almost good! If we could have that kind of outcome it would be almost worth it. I got a little confused when you shifted gears but quickly picked up where you were going with it. This was very creative! Congratulations!