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11/21/05
Solid. Good poem, well written. Thanks, I enjoy reading good work.
11/22/05
Strong, solid, smooth transition from the literal to the metaphorical.
11/25/05
The path is easier because He's already been there! Great analogy! (and poem! :) )
11/25/05
Very moving poetry, that reaches the very inner soul of those who are trying to walk in His footsteps. Well done, His good and faithful servant...Well done!
Beautifully written. Loved the analogy. Well done.
11/26/05
The analogy of struggling to match the footsteps of a tall man to the struggle to walk the path that Christ calls us to walk is good. Excellent rhythm and rhyme. I like the "steps like stains upon the snow" in stanza 3. Nice job!
11/26/05
Very nice- good images
11/26/05
Gorgeous poetry. Thank you for this beautiful entry.