The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/14
This was powerfully mesmerizing and hauntingly beautiful. What a great display of skillful writing you have presented here. Your forays into past memories, juxtaposed with current situations was perfect and your writing made me feel every feeling, remember every memory and ache for each and every pain.

Great, great job!
05/04/14
One of the most touching, beautiful, and tender stories I've read in some time. I'm writing this through tears, and felt your heart throughout the entire piece, especially the last paragraph.

Thank you for sharing, and how wonderful, in this particular aspect for technology, to have your husband's voice come alive reading as you keep him in your heart forever, until you meet again one day in heaven.

God bless you abundantly~

Congratulations on ranking 15th overall!