The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/14
Well written entry. Nicely done. God bless~
04/25/14
Loved this. You've excelled at painting a picture of what it could have been like and what went wrong. Well done.

A little red ink:
God said "You're welcome." (Not your.)
Great imagination, great writing, great entry!