The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent job with the topic, which was clearly evident by contrasting differences in the sobering conclusion. Well done.

God bless~
Wow! You jerked me from laughter at your MC's frustration over a stupid password to a very sobering ending of someone dying from a real problem. Great job of providing perspective and illustrating the topic.

Nice job!
Excellent job of showing the frustration that most of us have faced at some time with so many passwords and user names. You made it easy to relate with. I was left very curious about who was behind the office door. Higher management perhaps?

You gave us a stark contrast between the two crises presented. Good job.
I liked this. I could so relate to the frustration of passwords and computers...and so not relate to the very real problem of TB. Good job, thought provoking.

God bless~
Congratulations on your EC placement. I really enjoyed this story...I just re-read it and it made me laugh and tear-up again.

Great job!
Oh boy, could I ever relate! My list of usernames and passwords could practically be a book! You did an excellent job at contrasting the two. I was shocked at first with the complete change of pace and tenor but it was a perfect way to jar us into seeing the contrast. Wonderful! Congratulations!