The Official Writing Challenge
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This was really different. I liked the unique approach.
Nicely done.

God bless~
I really enjoyed this. Loved the #'s. Couldn't wait to see what the next one said.

I'm not sure if you intended this, but I thought it was brilliant how you drew this problem out in an excruciatingly agonizing fashion, and all over a car, which is a big deal to some (should I buy food, or get a new car?), but compared to the staving third world child, it is light and momentary...maybe worth one #. And so, they way you drew it out, in my opinion, really solidified the concept of a "first world problem."

If you didn't intend this, I still think it's brilliant, and if you did intend it, I think it's super-brilliant.

Fantastic application of theme!

God bless~
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