The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/14
Yes! Amen & Amen!!!

A prolific commentary which profoundly aligns with current times, while bringing home a message that is glaringly apparent!

Excellent job, I pray the judges take notice of this one!!!

God bless~
04/26/14
This has a nice flow to it and certainly delivers and excellent message. I really enjoyed reading it, and poetry is not usually my preference.

Very nice job. Thanks for sharing.
04/26/14
Nice rhythm and flow and definitely an important message. Great job!
04/29/14
Great job here and love the last stanza! Amen!
04/30/14
Loved the poem...it had a great message. How do you do it? I so wish I had the ability to make poems flow and rhyme and dance like you do. Good job!
This is beautiful. The words flow right off the pages and into my heart.
05/02/14
Lynn, sorry I'm so late with this one. No matter where this one placed, you have nailed the problem and the solution well. I like the rhymes and straight forwardness of this piece. You did a good job with this. Keep them coming!