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Love love love the ending! I could have written this piece - every word sounds just like something I've done or said or thought. Great work!
Well done, and well said!
Excellent work.
God bless~
You have a good message here. We should not waste precious time googling or any activity that takes us away form God.
I enjoyed your poem. Blessings, LaVonne
Very well said, indeed. It's amazing how we always forget that where we spend our time is indicative of what we worship. Do we spend inordinate amounts of time watching TV? Then we are worshipping it. I have known people who can waste entire days away at a time on the internet, googling this and that, reading drivel and flipping from one nonsensical Yahoo story to another (almost all written by amateur journalists who haven't done one thing to verify their declarations) - the internet has become their God.

We, myself included, need to spend more time with the real deal - as you so aptly point out in this piece. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Powerful last line! Lots of truth in this poem.
I especially like this line:
"Googled me to find how ho-hum boring I be."
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