The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/14
Excellent story! Wow, you know how to weave a good yarn!

Completely nailed the topic while brining a story to life, and the consequences of relying on "technology" to train and to entertain, bringing forth a dynamic and powerful message at the close of this well written entry.

Genius! Well done.

God bless~
04/19/14
Excellent story-telling. I liked how the nay-sayer's words came true by the end of the day. Well done.
04/21/14
Beautifully told and scary story. Well done.
04/24/14
Congratulations!!!!!!
04/24/14
Congrats! God bless~
04/24/14
Rachel Congrats to you! You are so good at creative storylines! I loved this! I am so behind in reading bricks etc( on a good note -bec I'm up more! praise God!) anyway... A big congrats again!
Wow this is sensational!When Q was 2 he knew all about the computer and I thought I was giving him an advantage... Until he couldn't draw a picture of himself for kindergarten. He had done amazing things on the computer but didn't know how to draw a person. It opened my eyes in a hurry. I love your story. Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!