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I can relate to your MC's choice to lean on her heavenly father in the absence of a good earthly father. Ironic isn't it that when we don't have what we want, we realize that He is all we need? You did a great job of helping me to feel your MC's thoughts and emotions and I like that the ending wasn't cliché. Good job!
Excellent! WOnderful job with this entry, and completely on topic.

Nicely done.

God bless~
An absolutely wonderful article!! The Internet has radically changed our lives of which no one 25 years ago would have envisioned. Having Ellie to save the email for another day, left me with a good feeling that in all probability she would reach her father. Either way, her true heavenly father would be there, and would give her the love that no earthly father could ever give.
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