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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: googled (04/10/14)

TITLE: Somewhere
By Wesley Hesketh
04/14/14


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Iíve wandered all around,
most of the time Iím lost.
The sin in which I wallow,
is fun, but at a cost.

it makes me end up lonely,
most of the time a fool.
All the things Godís given,
Iíve lost, yes every tool.

I sat around my friendís house,
throwing questions about.
He said google the answer,
I ask whatíll that find out?

You see thereís a search engine,
not one that rides on a track.
You can get all your answers,
from eternity and back.

Itís something on the computer,
that helps you find your way.
It can lead you into righteousness,
it can teach you how to pray.

This may sound a story,
you might not think itís true.
But if you have a computer,
this has happened to you.

I couldnít feel God with google,
it seemed so empty and bare.
I feel him here, He holds me close,
then I know He cares.

Iíve figured out something,
if you google, God may not be found.
Itís only when you open your heart,
youíll finally find Him around.

God truly loves this world,
Heís not out there in the lines.
Ask Him, Heís the answer,
Heís been here all the time.


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Lollie Hofer 04/17/14
I love a good poem! Your rhymes weren't forced and your meter was consistent. Good message too.
CD Swanson 04/19/14
Loved your message and your take on the topic. Well done.

God bless~
Larry Whittington04/22/14
Easy to follow the meaning from beginning to the end.

Good pattern of rhyming words. These did not seem forced.

Good thoughts throughout. You did well expressing yourself in this poem.
Joni LeRette-Flores 04/24/14
Very creative and heartfelt. The poem flowed smoothly and made for an enjoyable read. Good job!