The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/14
This was very captivating from the beginning. I felt like I was around that fire. Excellent writing. My only negative comment is that it seems a bit of a stretch for the topic. Other than that it's very, very good.
04/11/14
My one criticism would be that you name the boy Brotski in one spot and Grotski (at least that's how I read it).

Other than that, it was a very fascinating and tense read. Overall, a very nice job.
04/13/14
Entertaining and well written entry. Could easily be a booklet with expansion of words.

Well done!

God bless~