The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the part where the pastor jumped in the "shallow" end. :) Your gripping story had me holding my breath. Powerful writing!
This reminds me of the many stories behind our fears. You recounted it very well.
How moving that Muriel prayed especially for any small child to be spared fearful memories. It seems in some timeless way, that her prayer helped her, too.