The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/14
I LOVE your metaphor of delving into God's Word, "not content to splash around in shallows near the shore" (I'm right there with you!) You've filled this image-laden light-hearted poem with wit and wisdom. <3
03/18/14
Your ending was just perfect. This was wonderful; perfect rhyme and meter. It was engaging and told a very personal story. Loved it. Hope it does well with the judges.
03/18/14
This is beautifully written and speaks to my heart. Your words make me want to face my fears and be led by God.
03/19/14
I could not resist venturing over to level 4 to see what you had wrote. I can see why you are on this level.

I must say I love this. You said in beautiful poetic form what I said in devotional style.

The words flowed in unity much like a song. I can tell you know what you are talking about.

I look forward to reading more of your work

Blessings!
Congratulations for ranking 12 overall! Happy Dance!!