The Official Writing Challenge
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I LOVE your metaphor of delving into God's Word, "not content to splash around in shallows near the shore" (I'm right there with you!) You've filled this image-laden light-hearted poem with wit and wisdom. <3
Your ending was just perfect. This was wonderful; perfect rhyme and meter. It was engaging and told a very personal story. Loved it. Hope it does well with the judges.
This is beautifully written and speaks to my heart. Your words make me want to face my fears and be led by God.
I could not resist venturing over to level 4 to see what you had wrote. I can see why you are on this level.

I must say I love this. You said in beautiful poetic form what I said in devotional style.

The words flowed in unity much like a song. I can tell you know what you are talking about.

I look forward to reading more of your work

Congratulations for ranking 12 overall! Happy Dance!!