The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/14
Nice job! I especially like that part where you say that "smokey eyes are blind." How true! How poetic this is, I think you hit the nail on the head with what you're trying to say. Well done.
03/13/14
Well written and delivered. I really felt your message as I read through this clever and moving entry.

God bless~
I love this poem. My favorite verse is "He shows me a soul thatís healed,
I'm finding out it's mine." That is Grace. Very powerful.
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