The Official Writing Challenge
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11/22/05
So true! So beautiful! and so well done! Aside from the story...I loved each... "and the winter winds blew"...especially the last one about spring...a Fine Job!
11/24/05
Ok. I was a little lost with this. I don't get what was going on at the start and why the people were acting so cold. You need to point it out to us that can't read between the lines.
Talented writing though. Gave me lots to think about.
11/25/05
I enjoyed that picture of the warmth within the friends home, sharing the gospel. Sometimes formal type services contribute to frigidity and chilly atmosphere. Thanks for sharing your story. God bless ya, littlelight