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03/07/14
I loved the realism in the ending of this. That even though his Dad says he'll be their, there's still some disbelief. That's how it is in those situations. Great story.
03/11/14
This story was very authentic and held my attention right to the last word.

I hope the dad will show up and be there for his son.

Nicely done.

God bless~
Very real conversation and situation. Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 10 in your level and 15 overall.