The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this wonderfully creative story of the millennium,inspired by Scripture. The characterization and setting are both excellent. The descriptive details drew me in--the lion and the lamb together, the hint of sulfur in the air. The Scriptures listed below make for a great Bible study.
03/11/14
Well done! Excellent job with powerful scriptural references.
I loved how you emphasized that 'many will be fooled' by the evil one. Jesus warned us many times of his coming.

God bless~
03/12/14
Vividly descriptive - without going over the top. Your biblical research is obvious, as is the clear tone of the warning. Excellent work.
03/13/14
How thought-provoking this is? Amazing descriptive writing, that encourages thinking on 'times yet to be'. Wonderful to list the Scriptural references too - for thoughtful contemplation! Great writing that gives both hope and warning.
Congratulations on ranking 9th in your level and 12 overall! Happy Dance!
This was so interesting.First I thought the title was a radio station frequency. I used to listen to a KA station in Adelaide.You have added a new term to my vocab. There is BC, BCE,CE,AD and now KA. What a great twist on the topic;the end of the middle of the end, before the ultimate end! I especially appreciated the thoughts about the Spring and Fall Feasts. There is a new awareness of these. The end (the first end) is near! He is coming! Thanks for your contribution.